Monday, April 5

New Poem

I need your opinion on this:

Finding Myself
By Quentin Grzyb

Look into the mirror what do I see
I see a lifeless reflection of myself
A shell so hard that is shatters the human soul
Inside that dark shell is a person filled with such passion
The kind of passion that brings life and enlightens the darkest of times
Now look into the mirror again and what do you see
I see a strong vigilant human being who will live another day.
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6 comments:

  1. MTApril 5, 2010 at 10:25 PM

    yes with a poem like that you will live another day.
    keep writing.

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  2. Newport ChrisApril 6, 2010 at 6:45 PM

    great poem!

    May I ask what was the motive for this poem?

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  3. csulastudentApril 6, 2010 at 10:18 PM

    The motive of this poem was to express the real person inside all of us.

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  4. Ms.sunflowerApril 7, 2010 at 11:42 AM

    The great thing about this poem is that we can all connect to it at some point in our life.

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  5. WonderApril 7, 2010 at 12:05 PM

    Deep...

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  6. its meApril 7, 2010 at 10:34 PM

    wow...what a great poem

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